Friday 5 March 2021

Extended Practise: Weeklies Feedback Adjustments

Extended Practise
Weeklies Feedback Adjustments for Final Film


  • This week:
    • We received feedback on the progress of Aviation Aggravation.
  • What went well:
    • The tutors and class believe that the animation is coming along really well. The character animations work well, the backgrounds are looking very professional and they have been impressed by the workflow we have.
  • What could be improved:
    • I needed to adjust Shot 4, as Geoffrey's lines seemed slightly thicker in comparison to the cat in the front. I did this by converting the vector lines to pencil lines, then adjusting the size, then converting it back to a vector brush. 
    • Here are the lines before and after:


Lines Before


Lines adjusted

    • The tutors also believed that the jump of the mouse didn't fit the overall animation style we were going for, so I re-animated the jump, rather than using the tweening style.
    • I still think this shot could be further adjusted, but I will need further feedback for that.



Shot 6 Before


Shot 6 Improved


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