Context of Practice 1
Essay Feedback
After having submitted my essay and had my visual journal reviewed, I found that my essay had several improvements to be made. These consisted of inconsistencies with the references, some grammar and phrasing mistakes and some additional changes needing to be made in my evaluation. As my next steps I will explore the Uncanny Valley in my visual journal to tie back with my research and correct the essay mistakes.
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