Animation 1: Animation Fundamentals - Feedback

Animation 1: Animation Skills

Formative Feedback and Improvement

Positive Feedback:

• Good pendulums
• Task 2: Turn around worked well, Storyboard dynamic
• Task 3: Bouncing ball improved greatly the second time

From both my peers and tutor, I received minor feedback to improve the work I have already done and also the work I complete in the future. I was told by both my tutor and peers to add colour and make my original storyboard more understandable. Which was the first thing I completed.

The Original

Improvements

In addition to this, I was told to make my poses more dynamic in my model sheet and also redo the solid drawing task, to make the movements of the figures less stiff, following a line of action. I improved the model sheet and was able to practise fluid movement in both model sheets.

Orions' Sheet

Chamomiles' Sheet

To improve my line-of-action studies, with the solid drawing Study Task 1, I decided to redo the poses and try to break them down more to a skeleton, then fleshed out. The one colour and full render were also redone:

Here is the PDF Link to the solid drawing redos and the spot colour drawings and full render.

Here is the PDF embedded:

Spot Colour:

Full Render:

Here is the link to the OLD version

Old PDF: